the night undresses oh so slowly star by star across the sky leaving her clothes hidden behind dark energy wink by wink she teases us sending her trails tantalizing our eye far above the sky we stare but do not dare to grasp her natural reason just part of the season but we hold our breath we make that wish and hold it till the blushing sun chases night's nudity from the sky
01/03/2009
very beautiful
The flow and language in this come together so well. You make it look pretty damn effortless.
Wow! This one goes in my favorites. What magnificent and gentle heaven you brush into my day - making me eager for the evening and the opportunity to experience that splendid nakedness in a new way. Beautiful!