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a t o n e m e a n t

by Trisha De Gracia

N O T C R U T C H N O R C H U R C H
N O R L U R C H I N G C H E S T
N O T S T A R R Y E Y E S O R
S T O L E N B R E A T H N O T
K N I G H T E D N O T I M M U N E
T O D E A T H O H L O V E
O H L O V E I S L O V E O H L O V E
I S W H A T I S L O V E I S L O V E
O H L O V E I S L O V E I S
L O S T A N D F O U N D A N D
F L I G H T E D F A L L E N
U S E D A N D S P I L T A N D
S L I G H T E D B R O K E N
O P E N G A M B L E D T O K E N S
B A R R E L E N D S T I L L A I M E D
S T I L L W A R M A N D S M O K I N G
S T I L L
W H A T L O V E I S
W H A T I S S T I L L W H E N L O V E
I S W H A T I T I S
A N D W H A T I S I T

H E R E I S T H A T A L L U S I V E S E C R E T:
L O V E I S J U S T A F I R M D E C I S I O N

L O V E I S S E R E N D I P I T O U S
C O L L I S I O N.






12/20/2008

Author's Note: Ok guys, a love poem. Let'er rip.

Posted on 12/21/2008
Copyright © 2020 Trisha De Gracia

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Aaron Michael on 12/22/08 at 02:21 AM

you have beautiful flow here. i am in serindipitous collision with this piece.

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/22/08 at 12:09 PM

As a hoepless romantic, this is beautifully creative with a beautiful message.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/22/08 at 04:40 PM

trisha!!! this is amazing. you have a great play with the going on and the last 2 lines. yup, you got it girl.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/23/08 at 01:43 PM

... this is brilliant... I could not rate it high enough.....

Posted by Tricia Marie Miel on 12/27/08 at 07:57 AM

LOVEly is what this is. +fav

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/16/09 at 02:14 PM

It strangely dragged me into it's form and it had a great rhythm. Great write. Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/16/09 at 03:55 PM

Congrats on POTD! This is quite riveting and I love the flow. The all caps give it an intense feeling and also a feeling of important continuity. Cool!

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/16/09 at 06:16 PM

Riveting is the word I was looking for, thanks, Kristina. Fabulous POTD, fabulous!

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/16/09 at 06:17 PM

L O V E I S J U S T A F I R M D E C I S I O N


A Y E !
Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/16/09 at 06:43 PM

Congrats on POTD!!! Well deserved.....

Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 10/11/11 at 10:17 AM

this is excellence...skimming the pond for fresh flavored poems...this is one. gold star for you lady lu...

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