|Member Comments on this Poem
|Posted by Aaron Michael on 12/22/08 at 02:21 AM
you have beautiful flow here. i am in serindipitous collision with this piece.
|Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/22/08 at 12:09 PM
As a hoepless romantic, this is beautifully creative with a beautiful message.
|Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/22/08 at 04:40 PM
trisha!!! this is amazing. you have a great play with the going on and the last 2 lines. yup, you got it girl.
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/23/08 at 01:43 PM
... this is brilliant... I could not rate it high enough.....
|Posted by Tricia Marie Miel on 12/27/08 at 07:57 AM
LOVEly is what this is. +fav
|Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/16/09 at 02:14 PM
It strangely dragged me into it's form and it had a great rhythm. Great write. Congrats on POTD!
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/16/09 at 03:55 PM
Congrats on POTD! This is quite riveting and I love the flow. The all caps give it an intense feeling and also a feeling of important continuity. Cool!
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/16/09 at 06:16 PM
Riveting is the word I was looking for, thanks, Kristina. Fabulous POTD, fabulous!
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/16/09 at 06:17 PML O V E I S J U S T A F I R M D E C I S I O N
A Y E !
|Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/16/09 at 06:43 PM
Congrats on POTD!!! Well deserved.....
|Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 10/11/11 at 10:17 AM
this is excellence...skimming the pond for fresh flavored poems...this is one. gold star for you lady lu...