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White-out

by Nancy Ames

"The snow is falling faster
and I could never say
I'd save her from disaster -
I had to go away.

I'd never seen her face
when she came on to me -
she seemed so commonplace -
I take it when it's free.

Her child with my blue eyes
is looking through a fence
at jungle and bright skies
and scenes of violence.

I can't see six feet further
than the windshield of my truck.
I didn't mean to hurt her -
she just ran out of luck.

Thank God, I'm almost home!"
Then everything went black -
in twisted steel and chrome,
he rode the railroad track.

12/19/2008

Posted on 12/19/2008
Copyright © 2024 Nancy Ames

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/20/08 at 01:36 AM

Powerhouse last stanza. I really enjoyed this.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/20/08 at 02:06 AM

Riveting combination of weather and humanity. Thought provoking exercise in "connect the dots." White ones that is.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/20/08 at 02:18 AM

Both a lament and a ballad. This would make a good song.

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