|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/10/08 at 07:36 AM|
The only redemption is the lesson.
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/10/08 at 05:49 PM|
Though I do hope you don't fail (I'm assuming in life), I will say yes to more stuff like this. Very quick, very sharp wit.
|Posted by Laura Doom on 12/10/08 at 07:46 PM|
So, what is it you've done? That's got to be some shit worth telling :> Nice twist on the hot knives (through butter) theme...
|Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/11/08 at 04:46 PM|
very quick, clever, and sharp Dave. like it alot. oh, and i hope you succeed....
|Posted by Scott Utley on 01/11/09 at 12:57 AM|
May I have your permission to recite this poem to my face in the mirror?
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/13/09 at 01:20 PM|
I can relate. Just the other night I tried to express the pain accompanying feelings of inadequacy and it fill on deaf ears - worse - it was rejected and judged. It actually helps me to read it here. Thanks for the honesty and the gift of this poem.