| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/10/08 at 07:36 AM The only redemption is the lesson. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/10/08 at 05:49 PM Though I do hope you don't fail (I'm assuming in life), I will say yes to more stuff like this. Very quick, very sharp wit. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 12/10/08 at 07:46 PM So, what is it you've done? That's got to be some shit worth telling :> Nice twist on the hot knives (through butter) theme... |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/11/08 at 04:46 PM very quick, clever, and sharp Dave. like it alot. oh, and i hope you succeed.... |
| Posted by Scott Utley on 01/11/09 at 12:57 AM May I have your permission to recite this poem to my face in the mirror? |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/13/09 at 01:20 PM I can relate. Just the other night I tried to express the pain accompanying feelings of inadequacy and it fill on deaf ears - worse - it was rejected and judged. It actually helps me to read it here. Thanks for the honesty and the gift of this poem. |
