Chasing/Chased by - the Sun, Moon, rising by Racquel Cervantesnostalgia(
mind's eyes escaping, sanctuaries
of ocean's breaking- new dawned horizons
racing
across my homeland.
oh, to be bathed in that new taste of
rebirth; this Everyday
a new beginning, end. chance.
)and I leap at the thought of seeing you
tonight
high in the clouds- above, beyond
waking dreams.
Heart, [with this breath]
I pray you
lead. 12/09/2008 Posted on 12/09/2008 Copyright © 2025 Racquel Cervantes
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by George Hoerner on 12/09/08 at 09:11 PM Very nicely done Racquel. I pray your heart takes you always to a safe place. |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/11/08 at 04:09 AM There's a great snapshot here of a person trying desperately to keep from getting lost. It's made even better by how obvious it is that you're damn sure not going down without a fight. I love how you put this together, and I love how strong your message comes across. |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/18/15 at 02:22 PM lovely and graceful, this ode to sojourning solo. |
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