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The Ohio by Vikki OwensTwenty-some years
on the banks of Ohio,
growing up in the reflection
of light off its waves,
and the smell of the water
sinking down to the bottom
where the catfish
and mud-eaters filter the silt.
Twenty-some years
with same bridge and
skyline
the Ohio-Carpenter
stretched its tressels
of iron
across the-same-color
river as it rose and it
fell.
Twenty-some years
and I left it just as quickly
as my young legs would take me
wading through
the water, sometimes shoulder high,
to escape
the fate of so many before me
to drown in that town
on the river Ohio.
12/05/2008 Author's Note: I am not the only one who felt this way.
Posted on 12/06/2008 Copyright © 2026 Vikki Owens
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 12/06/08 at 02:11 AM Good write Vikki. You can drown any where even if there is no water, in a town, in a city, or even at home in bed. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/06/08 at 02:44 AM I enjoyed the details here. I wonder what you'll feel about it in 20 more years. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 12/06/08 at 06:30 PM Very nice Vikki, where in Ohio are you originally from??? I'm currently stuck there. Ha. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 12/07/08 at 02:51 PM This is purely perfect. I can relate. (And I know I'm not the only one...) Genius writing ~ the way of a perfect metaphor.
Jill |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 12/10/08 at 02:17 PM i think you should specify the age instead of saying 'twenty-something.' i like specifics...they're easier to grasp and explore with my fingertips. |
| Posted by CM Bauer on 01/29/09 at 08:36 PM Excellent... I read your forum post about this, which directed me here; I feel the very same about my town. |
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