| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/02/08 at 05:14 AM And I wish you luck, man. Great work. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 12/02/08 at 05:06 PM ...george, ahhh, don't know whether to compliment you on this work or drive over there and give you a good tawkin' to regarding TRUTH and your search for it...wait on me. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 12/02/08 at 08:02 PM Any poem that starts, sew well,
with a thimble full of symbols
should weave the chase for truth
throughout the tale....
;-D Great job, George! |
| Posted by Colleen Sperry on 12/04/08 at 06:51 PM interesting write.. love the first two lines!! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 12/05/08 at 07:06 PM Lovely and very musical when read aloud. Nice work! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/08/08 at 04:01 AM A symbol of good writing George...CharMin |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/08/08 at 04:37 PM You are anthropologist, linguist, philosopher, humorist, psychologist, and, oh yes, poet - all in 21 lines. Fun and thought-provoking at the same time. The meaning and import of that little 5 letter symbol has so often elluded me as well. It is good to find another who has ruminated - but you with such skill and depth of thought. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/11/08 at 04:08 AM Your use of everyday items as symbols makes me tremble at what comes next - "Symbols II"? Brilliant dance of words as symbols and images. |
