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Vergiss Mich

by Wayne Tate

I left footprints in the grass;
My steps lingered while tracing a line of memory
Then curved into reflections left on vine covered walls;

Fluid foot-falls of the softest pace;
Pressing the earth and defining my shape;
Then flooding the impressions with water

Soaking the heeled cracks as they were;
Tracing the ghosts from behind with out-stretched shadows
and blending back into mossy ground

I could sense the pull and pain of memory;
With rain the emotional divide,
The instant reminders as I cave and collapsed

As I turn, I began to perceive the forgotten pattern;
Floating on a soaked path;
Bathed in the mist which had echoed a lie

I had a moment;
A stolen flicker through fog;
That my presence was never there

11/29/2008

Author's Note: Title is German. Translates to "Forget Me"

Posted on 11/30/2008
Copyright © 2024 Wayne Tate

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/30/08 at 08:36 AM

I absolutely love the images in this one. It gives me a mystic and mysterious feel. Like it a lot!

Posted by Olivia Martin on 12/01/08 at 12:59 AM

Wayne, I've been searching for the words to craft a piece that speaks so memorably as this one. Thank you, for sharing this; the read was inspiring!

Posted by Sarah Wolf on 12/02/08 at 08:51 PM

The last line really sticks with me... entrancing...

Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/26/09 at 04:58 PM

Ah, the word choices are stunning and soak my imagination into that footfall present, pull me under the layered impressions. Wow! What a poem!

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