| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/20/08 at 05:57 AM I love that last stanza. It's just brilliantly and very cleverly done. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/20/08 at 06:14 AM I appreciate the brevity - most effective. Thank you. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 11/20/08 at 05:22 PM "Legs swinging in that last spill
of half-truth" i want to steal that, but even if i did i don't know what i would do with it.
and i missed your call again |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 11/20/08 at 09:36 PM the first three lines did it for me. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 01/05/09 at 01:46 AM this was excellent. i loved the first stanza |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 06/11/13 at 08:55 AM In the absence of a collaborative relationship, I can at least immerse myself in your individuality here in no man's land... |
