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I Keep Dreaming of Your Fingers

I keep dreaming of your fingers
And the water leaking through
Your two cupped hands

11/17/2008

Posted on 11/18/2008
Copyright © 2026 David Garner

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Olivia Martin on 11/18/08 at 03:04 AM

This strikes me in a way I can't quite pinpoint; too many diverse images could work with your words -- wonderful job!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/19/08 at 01:37 AM

You draw quite a word picture which the imagination can then fill in. Striking!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/19/08 at 04:01 AM

This is very special, and something very moving about it. Thank you.

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