| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/16/08 at 03:50 AM Wonderful and absolutely pure poetry. Brilliant. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/16/08 at 02:21 PM Really nice write Maria. Very thought provoking. |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 11/16/08 at 05:41 PM Lovely! MFS |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/16/08 at 06:34 PM This poem is "artistic perfection". I enjoyed it immensely! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/20/08 at 06:24 AM I love your writing Maria....CharMin |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 11/20/08 at 07:11 PM Painting the picture for us with your words and thoughts, excellent. smh |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 11/21/08 at 06:40 PM ...sigh...
"strokes of forever minutes away" is such a creative way to express that thought... sensual poetry that transcends the senses. Exquisite. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 11/22/08 at 05:10 AM Wonderful sensory and word play. Love it Maria. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 11/23/08 at 09:03 AM ummm..those first three lines grabbed me...Eve, had she been a poet, could not have crafted better! |
