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I vs. i

I is a rather smug Idiot
and i can't stand his company.
He's too fat to smIle properly
and too Important for the side lines.

11/11/2008

Posted on 11/11/2008
Copyright © 2024 Rhyana Fisher

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Sarah Wolf on 11/11/08 at 02:13 PM

Cleaver... I like it...

Posted by Sarah Wolf on 11/11/08 at 02:14 PM

I mean clever, lol

Posted by Kristi Paik on 11/11/08 at 05:07 PM

clever indeed. cute and wonderfully imaginative.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/12/08 at 01:51 AM

heheheehe

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/12/08 at 06:50 AM

Very interesting and pretty cool as well.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/15/15 at 08:43 PM

Fun to see this as POTD! Congrats!

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