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raindrops shun the metronome

by Kristina Woodhill

raindrops shun the metronome
their beat comes
easily;
fingered pretense
taps tap tap tap tap tap tap,
a lead in
to deep
chest-felt drumming

on my wood bench thrumming

raindrops shun the picture frame
though windows grab
and snatch;
the smears smile
long and vertically,
lapping with a
sloppy tongue

eyes slip through, quite undone

raindrops shun the new drawn map
directives point
and glare;
each thorough
soaking through
mocks signs
that dictate
stops along the way

dissolving parchment lettered plots
surveyed as truths, soon washed away

11/03/2008

Posted on 11/03/2008
Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/03/08 at 05:35 PM

...k-gal, by golly you've danced w/ a raindrop?...lucy dawg and your descript o' the fluid...just loveRly loveRly

Posted by George Hoerner on 11/03/08 at 07:40 PM

A nice write for those who dance with raindrops as you do. Accepting what is given is a gift.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/04/08 at 08:26 PM

Wonderful Kristina. When it rains we need to go greet it, and stand there soaking up every drop like applause. But, "your" rain has an terrific, natural effervenscence I love. Delighted. Thanks.

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