behind already by Kristina Woodhill a poem-a-day and me without a prompt no alarm-clock buzz this morning but an extra hour sits with beguiling elasticity - a freebie fraction flexing in my amusement park mirror - hands floating sans polish sans paper sans pen eyes on their sides grow larger, brows knit as finger bends toward spastic thumb an index, an opposable two ideas cross-wise trying to point out their personal requirements as wingdings cartwheel and deja-vu sans light disappears 11/02/2008 Posted on 11/02/2008 Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill Member Comments on this Poem Posted by A. Paige White on 11/03/08 at 02:39 AM Great start! I really love the title and how this starts because I forgot too. The prompt Bruce gave is really good and I wish now I'd read it first. Ah well, we can be behind already together. This is excellent. My favorite stanza "an index, an opposable two ideas cross-wise I really look forward to seeing how your theme works itself out. You definitely "Hooked" me! Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/03/08 at 04:40 AM Fun reading Kris...CharMin Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 11/03/08 at 03:36 PM This is fun and clever - I like how you sneak Daylight Savings Time into it, and the swirl of images that go with being just a little disoriented or disorganized in the morning -love the ending.... d:-) Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)