|
I November and I November II
by A. Paige White
I November and I November II
a handle on this candle
cooling days, cooler nights
with a fire to douse such flame
and His arrows of soul delights
This year of eight and eights
for a number nine at a stretch
(you II, really give me the giggles)
Yes, I November you on November II
What shall I write fore III?
11/02/2008 Author's Note: I November remember on November II...
I decided to try Bruce's November a day poem, and bemused a line *** before November I but got caught up yesterday in other stuff and forgot to add to it. So anyway... This is a combo of yesterday's idea and looking through my old November poems to see what was going on in other years... Thanks Bruce! This is going to be fun! I don't think I need a prompt yet... ;-D
Posted on 11/02/2008
Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/02/08 at 04:23 PM Well, this was just a total visual experience. "I November and I November II" - what an original phrase and idea!! Fun stuff. Great costumes! I love the candy corn kisses also... poems within poems within....
|
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 11/03/08 at 03:30 PM Love the poem and its wordplay - couldn't access the visuals because of firewalling on my office comp - will have to return for that later - good luck with the challenge! d:-) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/03/08 at 06:00 PM Fun poem Paige, quite the visuals....CharMin |
| Posted by Kristi Paik on 11/03/08 at 06:41 PM cute and fun little poem, i |
| Posted by Kristi Paik on 11/03/08 at 06:41 PM i'm going to check it every day :) |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 11/03/08 at 07:12 PM very clever here Paige. I too foget to post one on the 1st but I had it written in my head. well done! |
|
