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Perception of Innocence

by Rusty C Arquette

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A mousy woman 
and her young daughter 
got on the city bus
     they sat across 
     from a black woman 
     in a bright white uniform
the little girl bobbed and swayed 
with the movements 
of the bus
     she stared intently 
     at the large silent woman 
     across from her…

the mother was lost 
in some distant thought 
out the bus window
     the girl slipped 
     from her seat and moved 
     to sit by the black lady
the woman absorbed 
in movement of the traffic 
didn’t notice…
 
the girl slid 
in increments closer 
to the focus of her interest
     the woman took notice 
     and looked at the little girl 
     and smiled…

the little girl’s mother 
then became aware 
the girl had moved
     she looked anxious 
     for a moment 
     watching the girl’s progress…

the black woman smiled 
calming 
the mother’s apprehension…

the girl stared 
at the black lady’s arm 
and then at her own arm
     she looked up 
     at the woman and then 
     back to the woman’s arm
the girl then reached out gently 
to touch 
the woman’s bare arm
     looking to the woman 
     for a reaction, 
     she hesitated for a second…

the woman bent toward her 
and grinned 
as she said to the girl
     ‘you go right ahead child, 
     you can touch it, 
     I don’t mind’

the girl touched 
the offered arm and looked 
at her hand intently
     she looked back 
     to the black woman 
     with a puzzled expression
the woman laughed aloud 
and gave the little girl 
a big squeeze
chuckling she said, 
     ‘oh no, baby, 
     it won’t come off, tha’s fo’ sure’

the girls mother 
called the reluctant little girl
to come sit by her
     still smiling nervously back
     at the black woman as she did…

‘children is all so curious little things’ 
the black woman said,
‘we should all be ‘dat simple 
and curious ‘bout life’…

I turned 
to the attractive oriental woman 
sitting next to me…
     her tan arm exposed 
     in a yellow 
     summer dress
my eyes 
played over it’s length 
till I met her eyes…

     she looked at me 
     with a dark 
     unyielding stare
‘don’t even think about it!’ 
she snapped…

ah, I thought; 
an unspoken lesson learned 
it would seem 
     perceptions of innocence 
     change with age and gender…

‘okay’ I replied, 
‘but if you don’t want me 
to get that wasp
     off your arm… 
     maybe you 
     should do something about it…’

She screamed, 
flailed her arms, 
and I sat the rest of the trip 
     on my own…

04/23/2003

Author's Note: The curiosity and wonder of our children never ceases to entertain me - RCat

Posted on 10/31/2008
Copyright © 2024 Rusty C Arquette

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 10/31/08 at 02:26 PM

Beautiful RCat! And what a gallant you were in offering to risk the sting to rescue her arm... I have so many cherished memories like this with my kids and grandson. They make life worth living in sooooo many ways.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/01/08 at 12:24 AM

Quite a story. Suspense, plot, and cool conclusion. All so succinctly in one poem!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/02/08 at 05:27 AM

A great read and picture to go with it Rusty....CharMin

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/05/08 at 12:03 AM

From sweet to silly, pleasing all ages. I really enjoyed this, RCat!

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 11/06/08 at 06:15 PM

I love your stories and your lessons taught, the twist at the end priceless. smh

Posted by Julie Adams on 01/29/10 at 10:55 AM

I do love this piece, it's story to simple yet so all encompassing...just lovely lesson and moment captured...I enjoy the humor to the end also...though I might suggest the use of the word Asian instead of Oriental, as that word is quite dated and offensive to some, since it generally refers to objects, not people...

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/29/10 at 04:07 PM

Congrats on POTD! Always a pleasure to read this one!

Posted by A. Paige White on 01/29/10 at 04:27 PM

What a delight to find this as POTD. Congratulats!
p.s.
It's still reads as skillfully and is as amusing now as it was when I first read it.

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