Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by George Hoerner on 10/30/08 at 05:29 PM Very cute lady. Quite enjoyable. |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/30/08 at 06:28 PM ... awesome..... |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/31/08 at 12:13 AM Even in brevity you bring a senuousness in these words.
An unwritten smile
Now dial
To get a busy signal!
(Being silly! *wink) |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/31/08 at 06:33 AM YOUR smile, sweet MM, is NEVER silent!!! (It's quite a talented smile - it sings, it dances, it weeps, it tells the tales your words cannot). Simply beautiful! |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/31/08 at 10:34 AM this is gorgeous! |
Posted by Wendy Sparling on 10/31/08 at 04:37 PM Only you, Maria, could write a verse as beautiful as a smile. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/01/08 at 04:14 AM Your unwritten makes me smile also. Thank you. |
Posted by Scott Utley on 01/02/09 at 06:14 PM you are the greatest poetess of our time |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/15/09 at 02:38 AM Nice to read Maria...CharMin |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/04/09 at 07:07 PM Stunning background compliments this beautiful poem. Your smile says it all- no words are needed! |