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did i shave my legs for this?
by Nanette Bellmanyou tell me that you love me.
that you're in love with me.
well, why is it
i only feel loved
when you're on top of me
naked
and inside me 10/23/2008 Author's Note: when you roll your eyes, it makes me want to smack them out of your head.
Posted on 10/23/2008
Copyright © 2026 Nanette Bellman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/23/08 at 02:42 PM I LOVED the title of this poem! It said it all! |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/23/08 at 03:26 PM I loved this as well.... I could not rate it high enough!!! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/24/08 at 12:37 AM You don't know how many times I've wanted to write a poem with this title. Now I'm with a guy who claims he doesn't care if I shave my legs (though I do because I care....lol). Anyway, your author's note - it makes us soul sisters! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/26/08 at 12:19 PM that certainly is the trick, to feel loved before and after the act, to feel a love which is not a spur of the moment thing, but love everlasting. this poem will last, for reason there is pure love in it. |
| Posted by Dani Rose on 10/27/08 at 04:34 AM indeed. i say, next time, don't shave at all. ...heh. on a serious note, i wish i couldn't relate to this--but i can. it made me uncomfortable with remembrance. the only thing i could hope to get from poetry is that it makes me feel anything, at all. good job. |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 11/24/08 at 05:16 PM Wow! what a write lol, has the bloke read it? He'll blush forever! |
| Posted by Emily Davidson on 12/05/08 at 11:26 PM AH. i had a "relationship" for a year with a guy that revolved around this concept. it's very hard, and shows just how complicated we women are. you said it eloquently and beautifully. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 12/14/08 at 10:55 PM oh wow, this is like my other poem. are we twins? |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 06/24/11 at 04:40 AM Wow...nothing like only feeling loved during sex. I had a relationship once, almost a year long, that felt like it was only sex with some sometimes socializing. |
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