| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 10/22/08 at 06:03 PM Lovely little write Kristina. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/22/08 at 06:13 PM I love it! I love all the fall flutterby races, whether with rake or my camera's shutter. Adorable, Kristina. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/22/08 at 10:00 PM ...K-gal, you made me grin a wonderous grin seeing your rake lapped by the butterFLYleaves, you go gal...a lovely ku... |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 10/22/08 at 10:51 PM Hee! Of course I anticipated something different with the word "rakish"...They fall faster that they can be gathered, sometimes. Nice Haiku. |
| Posted by Nancy Ames on 10/22/08 at 10:58 PM What a lovely and skilfully worded poem, Kristina, and a very nice thought about the flying leaves of autumn. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/27/08 at 03:33 AM Fun Haiku Kris. I can vision the race in my mind...CharMin |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/27/08 at 03:35 PM I love the image this evokes, your playfulness is only equaled in a flash-finish by the beauty of your language and the scene it paints. What draws me to this is the emotional response I feel on reading it. |
| Posted by Anastasia Selby on 10/27/08 at 05:00 PM I've just moved to TX, and I love seeing all the butterflies. Great write!
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