October Moon by Kristina Woodhill I've lost the moon so sorry it was clearly there the shine the sun's doing you know a nightly tease unveiling concave and convex shapes of waxing smooth a distant growing glow, but I drew closer and lit the match to find my way from here to there through dark to light reaching bravely through and in my hurry to caress the man in hiding there the hot match began the melting wane anew I've lost the moon so sorry 10/21/2008 Posted on 10/21/2008 Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/21/08 at 04:51 PM ...kristina, lovely concept, i wrote a short-short piece in which i say 'i have a job'...'i don't strike the match that lights the sun, but........' love it K... Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/21/08 at 04:52 PM ...btw you're forgiven for losing the moon... :-) Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/21/08 at 07:51 PM Ah, but you have not lost it, only borrowed its glow to refresh your own. Those of us who see it as a circumambulating aphrodisiac trust it is in good hands. Peace always. Thanks. Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/21/08 at 07:58 PM This is gorgeous, kristina! Posted by Scott Utley on 10/22/08 at 11:16 PM "I've lost the moon - So sorry" reminds me of "Eyes of a blue dog." Sublime such beauty. Posted by Jason Moskalyk on 11/21/08 at 11:52 AM it bends in and out quite like night. very good read. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)