it puts the lotion on its skin

by Nanette Bellman

i could Hannibal Lecter your heart
        rip it out of your chest
        rinse and repeat
if only you had another to spare


Author's Note: this is meant to hurt feelings.

Posted on 10/20/2008
Copyright © 2020 Nanette Bellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/20/08 at 07:28 PM

wow... harsh... well done!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/20/08 at 09:37 PM

oooooo, no knife needed here, you've got it handily....

Posted by Johnny Crimson on 10/20/08 at 11:31 PM

how would that feel?

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/21/08 at 04:41 PM

...nanette. so glad this you author-noted this, here i was thinking it was suuuuch a lovely gesture, i loved it annnyhooooo! great write, you Hannibal-Cannibal you!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/21/08 at 04:41 PM

...mix my words around so you can read this compliment, bwhmnahahahahahahaah

Posted by Anastasia Selby on 10/22/08 at 06:16 PM

it will. Well done.

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