| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/15/08 at 09:47 PM Oh I love it, George! I thoroughly enjoy "spoofing" standards just for fun and you've done a great job of mixing this up for us. Outstanding! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/16/08 at 04:07 AM Well played parody, man. Pretty bloody brilliant. |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 10/16/08 at 06:12 AM LOL! I really like this juxtaposition. Huzzah!
MFS |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/16/08 at 04:16 PM Brilliant in the way the nursery rhymes and cliches hide a profound message. I also love the rhymes. They bring a smile and a chuckle inspite of the dizzying and dazzling fix we are in. |
| Posted by Sarah Wolf on 10/16/08 at 07:15 PM What a way to take something you know and make it grow... |