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Snow White's Day-dream In Autumn

by Nancy Ames

"After summer, all the wide land
is like an aging woman, her temper
uncertain and fitful, either smiling
appealingly and stretching out her
bony hand, apple polished and fingers
long and yellow, or angered without
apparent reason so that we stumble
over dead things in fields that are
blackened but not burnt and sparkle
so absurdly in the pale sunshine like
cheap jewelry on a tattered costume
in which the old woman is trying to
distract everybody while her ancient
partners in crime, squawking and
flapping their heavy wings, gobble up
the last remaining seeds and fly away."

10/13/2008

Posted on 10/14/2008
Copyright © 2026 Nancy Ames

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/14/08 at 04:01 PM

Marvelous writing, adding a sophistication to a familiar story.

Posted by Sophia Grace on 10/14/08 at 05:58 PM

What a great addition to the fairy tale, and so beautifully descriptive. Great write!

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