| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by David Garner on 10/05/08 at 05:01 PM beautiful images and arresting rhythm. this is my kind of poem. |
| Posted by Melissa Panther on 10/05/08 at 07:08 PM I had to read this over and over...such vivid images, every line is captivating. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/06/08 at 04:20 PM This is both simple and complex in its meaning, but well written and enjoyed reading every word for its own cadence. |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 10/09/08 at 10:27 PM Nice even the building of motion matches what this is....very nice. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/10/08 at 06:41 PM The text and layout certainly add to the impact of the title. Well done, glad I had a chance to read this! :o) |
