| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/02/08 at 02:12 AM I think I tried something like that once. Sure feels like it, anyway. Excellent work, man. |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 10/02/08 at 03:52 AM brilliant. outstanding. vivid. memorable. incredibly memorable. and again with the author's note. |
| Posted by Sophia Grace on 10/02/08 at 04:17 PM I love this. It feels so incredibly familiar. And you know, you inspire me to write more. Thank you. I know it doesn't sound like much but it's all I have and I am so grateful. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/02/08 at 07:39 PM I enjoyed the play of the digital/pixelated voice - a pixelated voice - a totally unique thought. Line 4 is just too much fun to read over and over. You are the telescope - cool. I like the simplicity of "so bravely I caught you in a staredown" - nice. The author's note is electric.... ;)... |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 10/02/08 at 07:48 PM "this telescope is partially shattered" -- that image/idea/thought really resonates. i'd like to challenge you to write a poem that i'll dislike. write something worthless. please. |
Posted by Ava Blu on 10/02/08 at 11:05 PM
well, wtf can I add that hasn't already been said?
you were right, it tickles me. :) |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/03/08 at 02:02 PM Lovin this, Worthy! I so (too) dig-it-all, every word. So great to see you posting again! Bravo, Maistro. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/06/08 at 03:29 PM AH, what a great read. Brilliant. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/08/08 at 03:44 PM I cannot say anymore than this is one of your best pieces... |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/27/09 at 01:49 AM very powerful, great job |
