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Gradual Winter
by Joe CramerSo much darker now
As the sun slowly rises.
Gradual winter. 09/30/2008 Posted on 09/30/2008
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 09/30/08 at 05:43 PM Oh don't even mention winter yet!! Although I do love the different seasons...all for different reasons. Lovely Haiku. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/30/08 at 06:00 PM Great ku. I like how you have slowed the reader down here, especially with the last two words that beg to be said slowly. |
| Posted by Melissa Panther on 09/30/08 at 07:30 PM Simply lovely! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/02/08 at 05:03 AM Ya, ya, you and your Floridian winter...LOL!!! |
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