Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by A. Paige White on 09/28/08 at 10:07 PM I like your word search and how you seeking are a thought being sought. A poem, a thought that colors difference, maybe all the while it can show the same... Enjoyed this, George. |
Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 09/29/08 at 02:41 AM I'm right there with you...trying to put the "words" together is always a fun search for our individual expression!
MFS |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/29/08 at 06:18 AM "maybe i heard it
blared across
radio speakers or
was it whispered
by the wind
across some
span of time."--I love this entire stanza. The whole thing is packed with sparse, beautifully captured imagery. I don't think it's better summed up than here. |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/01/08 at 08:37 PM ...catch that word, xerox it and i.m. it back to me; i've been looking for the same one...love the intrigue you leave me/the reader with on 'that word' touche touche! |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/18/08 at 04:47 PM One wants to shout, "Eureka" when that word hits just right! Especially when writing to communicate an idea or feeling. Right on! Write on! |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/15/09 at 03:44 PM I am certain George, you will hear that word a few thousand times more before the muses pack it in. Its a lovely word, one of the loveliest in the field, which to reap and to cup to our ear is to render unto that organ music as ear has never heard. |