I really like the revolving approach you took to this, if that makes sense. The way it casually begins, moves through its scenes and comes back to its starting point to obviously begin the whole thing again. It's almost cinematic, in a way. Nicely done.

I like the structure of this very much, simplicity in observations that bind all living things, I think, although the openness of the flies on the kitchen wall - one might envy them their spontaneity (sp), or wonder if their exchange is any less special than ours.