word smiths by Kristina Woodhill why would you speak words others have written to debase why would you feed words blood red meat to arouse to divide why would you slash and smile shoving words striving to detonate rumi, oh rumi i miss you so as you dissolve within would you allow my hand to pause your mystic blissful spin surely since your Wedding Night that perfect union won the Beloved might extend to us your now much needed tongue 09/08/2008 Posted on 09/08/2008 Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Sophia Grace on 09/08/08 at 11:26 PM I really like this! "why would you slash and smile shoving words striving to detonate" really cuts to the core. Great write! Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/09/08 at 03:39 PM Brilliant, I love the way you stitched the 1st three stanzas with destructive verbs and then moved into two lovely pieces of artistic smithery :) Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)