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Seduce Me
by Alison McKenzieI love the depth of you,
The darker shades of contemplation;
The waters that call to me.
The adoration of your childs child,
The magic I sense beyond the miles
In your garden,
The leisure of your summers.
There is a balloon with our name on it,
And I, with you, would ride,
Coursing over trees and oceans,
Into the rising sun and out again,
Laughing over peaches
Drizzling down chins
And slurping the excess in kisses,
Sweet kisses.
These dreams (of you) seduce me.
09/02/2008 Posted on 09/02/2008
Copyright © 2025 Alison McKenzie
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 09/02/08 at 09:15 PM beautiful! |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/02/08 at 09:37 PM ... quite seductive..... |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 09/03/08 at 05:05 AM Yummy! MFS |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/03/08 at 02:10 PM ...Mrs. Wordsmither, i bow to you for poetics of warmth with lust: love. if i had this written to/about me, s'pose i'd move the proverbial mountain, you speak of a love, longing in length, if we/humans could bottle your words, we'd be rich...great write ali. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/06/08 at 03:12 PM A poignant romantic piece Alison. All three stanzas quite good and work well to contribute to the whole. I especially like the balloon and fruit imagery. |
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