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I am that giraffe in the photograph.

by Ryan Nardi

Long, since I was shorter,
I stand, head above the trees
like brittle green water.

And down where my knees
used to be, there's a dark
cloud gathering speed.

Off-the-cuff spittle could spark
the long baking brush 'neath the waves
where vegetarians eat like sharks.

These are not spots, they are saved
remnants of the color I used to be.
The lines are cracks I can't shave.

While you weren't talking to me,
my horns grew tufts of hair,
where you left me, mid-stride, in the heat.

Now, ask me if I'll make black-tongue-flickered air.
Ask me if my long-faced grin really cares.

08/30/2008

Author's Note: Submission for a contest, inspired by Lauri Blum's picture of a giraffe.

Posted on 08/30/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ryan Nardi

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/31/08 at 02:54 PM

Cool!!!!! Creative, refreshing, vital.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/03/08 at 02:06 PM

...ryan, so glad to see this one spotlighted...i thought i already sent my wows to you and yet i notice i did not...duh! to me...i read this last week or so and thought wonders about it: it was from a prompt[not easy]and i love the word-choice from the first line...i am chagrined that i haven't bragged on this pome before now, and i thought i had, double duh! now that you're somebody nahahahaha...great work.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/03/08 at 02:50 PM

Ryan - I sure hope you are going to enter this in the Poetry/Forums/Contest/Photopoetagraphy thread. It is terrific.

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