Oh! Ancestural Drama by Tony Whitaker
At last our fate has us together
friends so long on different paths
though we spoke in peaceful platitudes
we were deafened when our worlds approached
As the asteroid, smashes into earth,
creasing an "Oh!" into the earth,
this cosmic drama dashed all normalcy
prescribing our mutual destruction
Now with orbits closing in,
a collision of sapien celestial objects,
rushing in to fill the void,
flames of lust create barren fields
where once lived those
who once trusted.
08/29/2008 Author's Note: Adultery has no happy ending...
Posted on 08/29/2008 Copyright © 2024 Tony Whitaker
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/29/08 at 08:24 PM Oooooh, the burn of this one is tangible. |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/29/08 at 08:52 PM ... hmmm.... quite interesting..... |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/30/08 at 04:07 PM ...gulp!... |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/02/09 at 04:44 AM The passion and quaking injury in this is palpable. The realization admirable. The wisdom appreciated. Good one, Tony. |
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