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Caveat Emptor

by Melissa Panther

It rains
you pour
your soul
into my open hands...

I wander
you wait
for everything
and nothing...

I'm damned
you don't
second guess
any syllables...

simply impressionistic
idealistic
so I say
caveat emptor...

08/06/2008

Posted on 08/06/2008
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Panther

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/06/08 at 11:48 PM

...melissa, i love the da dada of this and it spirals up and down, like bogie's cigarette, 'so you say you wanna dance, eh? you ain't dancin'!'...lovely lilt of a moment or a whole 50 year marriage, good capture...peace, charlie

Posted by Shirin Swift on 08/07/08 at 03:52 AM

ah, this trips off the mind wonderfully

Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/09/08 at 10:59 AM

... this is quite exeptional.....

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/13/14 at 03:42 PM

Congrats on POTD!

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