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What can not be had (underneath)

by Scott Cadence

my friend
from Coeur d'Alene
your eyes are still
full of the lakes
you swam in
as a child.

I can see our breath
when you look at me,
in that blue light before dawn -
those frozen mornings of
grandfathers
and rifles.

I feel seedlings spring forth
out of my skin
when you touch me,
like the earth is dug up
underneath -
that part of time
never left
your fingernails.

my friend
from Coeur d'Alene
the stories you're telling
in your sleep
is a constant motion
of air rushing against
pine needles
in a valley

that sound...
so much different
than the summer air
that's been moving the desert
against stucco houses
in my dreams.

~

07/25/2008

Posted on 07/26/2008
Copyright © 2024 Scott Cadence

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 07/26/08 at 06:15 PM

Always read your poetry and fall in love. You manage to capture beauty in so many ways with the use of 26 letters in an amazing combination. ...sigh... ~N

Posted by Paul Marino on 07/27/08 at 08:29 AM

i'm down

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/07/08 at 12:50 PM

Scott, this ode enchants the more one proceeds into its insightful shrubbery, which to quote Frost is lovely, dark and deep. I delight as St. Sebastian and stand disarmed before its archery which tags the heart with soulful darts.

Posted by S. Pelham Flood on 09/24/08 at 03:48 AM

the pairing of earth and body and the imagery in this poem is wonderful... Pelham

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