{ pathetic.org }
 

07-22-08

by Ava Blu


my mother,
who never paid attention before, never took things seriously,
is praying every day.
somehow,
i wish i had faith, too.


07/22/2008

Posted on 07/23/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Lacy D Phillips on 07/23/08 at 05:43 AM

How very direct and honest. You line breaks and spacing here speak volumes.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/23/08 at 03:02 PM

I'd say you've got something. Otherwise, I'd imagine you wouldn't be here. Great work.

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)