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07-22-08

by Ava Blu



my mother,

who never paid attention before,
never took things seriously,


is praying every day.


somehow,

i wish i had faith, too.




07/22/2008
Posted on 07/23/2008
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Lacy D Phillips on 07/23/08 at 05:43 AM

How very direct and honest. You line breaks and spacing here speak volumes.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/23/08 at 03:02 PM

I'd say you've got something. Otherwise, I'd imagine you wouldn't be here. Great work.

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