07-22-08 by Ava Blu
my mother,
who never paid attention before,
never took things seriously,
is praying every day.
somehow,
i wish i had faith, too.
07/22/2008
Posted on 07/23/2008 Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Lacy D Phillips on 07/23/08 at 05:43 AM How very direct and honest. You line breaks and spacing here speak volumes. |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/23/08 at 03:02 PM I'd say you've got something. Otherwise, I'd imagine you wouldn't be here. Great work. |
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