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Mosquitoes

by Melissa Arel



pesky blood-suckers
take a drink, uninvited
summer vampires



07/13/2008

Author's Note: i hate 'em.

Posted on 07/14/2008
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 07/14/08 at 04:32 AM

I am with you on this....hate the little buggers! Good description!

Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/14/08 at 04:46 AM

Hi Melissa, Great write. You've got that right, they sure are. Mean, pesty bugs. Vampires, for sure.

Posted by Julie Adams on 07/14/08 at 12:36 PM

(lived in the mosquito state capital, South FL. for almost 12 yrs)—TRUST ME, THIS IS A PERFECT LITTLE POEM FOR THOSE PESKY LITTLE BUGGERS...love it, love it, love it!!!! Thanks for making me smile...loved: "summer vampires," exquisite!!! peace, jewels

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 07/14/08 at 01:11 PM

"Gnat" my faves either, Mel..and you've been tagged..:0

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/14/08 at 02:25 PM

Got me itching from reading your poem Mel. Well done...CharMin

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/14/08 at 03:25 PM

Ditto! This is so good in a summer-ish way.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 07/14/08 at 09:35 PM

LOL! great hiaku!

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