Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 07/14/08 at 04:32 AM I am with you on this....hate the little buggers! Good description! |
Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/14/08 at 04:46 AM Hi Melissa,
Great write. You've got that right, they sure are. Mean, pesty bugs. Vampires, for sure. |
Posted by Julie Adams on 07/14/08 at 12:36 PM (lived in the mosquito state capital, South FL. for almost 12 yrs)—TRUST ME, THIS IS A PERFECT LITTLE POEM FOR THOSE PESKY LITTLE BUGGERS...love it, love it, love it!!!! Thanks for making me smile...loved: "summer vampires," exquisite!!! peace, jewels |
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 07/14/08 at 01:11 PM "Gnat" my faves either, Mel..and you've been tagged..:0 |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 07/14/08 at 02:25 PM Got me itching from reading your poem Mel. Well
done...CharMin |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/14/08 at 03:25 PM Ditto! This is so good in a summer-ish way. |
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 07/14/08 at 09:35 PM LOL! great hiaku! |