Tsunami Rage by Alison McKenzieThe tremors are the earmark -
The adrenaline -
Tsunami following
And there is no stopping it
Once the first wave makes its crest.
Where all that water comes from,
She's never certain.
But whole villages are wiped out,
Starting first with her very own home;
Friends fleeing in all directions
While the water threatens even the littlest ones,
Even the littlest ones.
You would think with a shining sun
And a cool breeze,
The actual prospect of danger would be thin.
But the waters are thick
Of swells and more where that came from,
The shrieking quickly hushed by
The dull roar of that perilous deluge.
And when she is silenced at last
Comes the lament
Of one pitiful woman
Who cannot quell her own power
But for the mountains,
Who have been domesticated by the
Stripping of timber
And greenhouse gases,
Laid bare in humiliation.
Look at whatÂ’s been done
That cannot be restored.
06/20/2008 Author's Note: Metaphors for the rage in a woman, and the man (mountain) who, once upon a time, could stop her, but is now stripped bare of his power by her sharp tongue and the ugly face of anger.
Posted on 06/20/2008 Copyright © 2025 Alison McKenzie
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/20/08 at 09:30 PM ...okay, i get it and ooohh do i see/feel it in my own range...one of the sadnesses of life is what i've said before, we will live this life without KNOWING THE JOY AND OR PAIN WE CAUSED ANOTHER...we just cannot ever know, one of the limits of humanity...yeah on the 'never to be restored'...gawsh i hate that...a word in anger, like an arrow cannot be withdrawn...much peace, charlie |
Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 06/21/08 at 02:15 PM More and more of this happening now...Mother Nature wreaking havoc and the Mountains bear silent witness. MFS |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/23/08 at 06:18 PM I agree with Charlie's sentiments. As I read your poem, I couldn't help but think of the horrible images of flooding and pain in the midwest this past two weeks - the brown erosion of lives. But now you give me another way to look at it all - with a moment of instrospection about the devastation I wreak with my judgments, critical or caddy comments about my fellow humans. What a species we are! But when I read your poem, I am reminded of the awesomeness of our ability to stand back and examine ourselves and be honest about our own fragility. Thanks, Alison. |
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