i see all the hues still stir their colors in your eyes while in your soul reside all loves as they seek shelter but is it true that all my smiles live in your heart do all spirits still swim in the depth of your body brilliance still shines in your mind and yet you fail to reveal yourself you are like the wind silently wandering through my mind ignoring or touching as you please or is it my mind that i lose and find in some kind of ritual activity hoping you somehow remember far into the night or at early morning when the sun pours through the window flooding your mind with memories
06/12/2008
Beautiful absolutely beautiful!
Wow. Deeply stirring imagery. Excellent!
It's as if she can barely be touched by anyone, but one is aching for her to recognize again. Haunting.
Quite captivating - lovely pacing.