Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/31/08 at 09:26 PM ...a mouthful of right! what a distinguished air you give the analysis of a logic i understand, take the science right out of it in a pome...charlie |
Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 06/01/08 at 05:32 AM "Being to nothingness" ... and how it circles the cycle of life/death. This is really what the "big picture" is, and I am sending it directly to my faves! Namaste
MFS |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/01/08 at 04:23 PM I think you are touching on soul-sense, stuff not meant for human calculations. Scientists still want to 'splain it all, when the truth is so much of it is meant to be inconceivable to us as mortals. I think as much as it can be understood, you've got it and express it brilliantly here, George! |
Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 06/02/08 at 02:09 AM Lifes cycle is what I see here in it's most primal form. Spring has sprung and ashes to ashes. I love "lifes oldest form of logic"
and the explaination.
Amazing,philosophical,deep and true! |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/05/08 at 01:00 AM A fascinating view of what I see as Reincarnation (last lines). |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/25/10 at 01:19 PM everything that isn't anchored down in my spirit is dervishing round and indicative that such orbits are manifested out of a central quality
in which this poem is rooted. |