05/29/2008
Posted on 05/29/2008Copyright © 2024 Brian Francis
Nice write! And so much of what has gone by shall never return. Well done.
haunting, I like it.
I love the rhythm of this piece, the way the words trip over themselves onto the next, propelling me mind forward to the next line. A journey, you've created - one that I'm glad to have traveled with you, if only for a moment.
Nice reflections here. I really like the last two stanzas.