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Ahhh... a Coke, and Your Smile

by Joe Cramer

Ahhh... a Coke and your smile.

Wait, make it a Diet.

Would that help?

But you would not remain quiet.

I want to dance

Slowly at first

Then a little faster.

Tell me, is one worse

Than the other?


I would pen you a verse,

What are you after?

05/21/2008

Author's Note: Do you know of those "May-December" relationships? I was married like that... once.... it was enough.....

Posted on 05/21/2008
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melissa Panther on 08/08/08 at 03:24 AM

Yes, I love this one...great work

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/25/08 at 01:08 PM

this poem waxes philosophical and is as lovely as May and December at their most enthralling display.

Posted by Laurie Blum on 12/27/08 at 04:40 AM

Definately one to think about!

Posted by A. Paige White on 12/27/08 at 06:24 PM

Only thing that could make it better would be a hint of lime. Really enjoyed this. My pick for potd.

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