Ahhh... a Coke, and Your Smile
by Joe Cramer
Ahhh... a Coke and your smile.
Wait, make it a Diet.
Would that help?
But you would not remain quiet.
I want to dance
Slowly at first
Then a little faster.
Tell me, is one worse
Than the other?
I would pen you a verse,
What are you after?
Author's Note: Do you know of those "May-December" relationships? I was married like that... once.... it was enough.....
Posted on 05/21/2008
Copyright © 2017 Joe Cramer
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Melissa Panther on 08/08/08 at 03:24 AM|
Yes, I love this one...great work
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/25/08 at 01:08 PM|
this poem waxes philosophical and is as lovely as May and December at their most enthralling display.
|Posted by Laurie Blum on 12/27/08 at 04:40 AM|
Definately one to think about!
|Posted by A. Paige White on 12/27/08 at 06:24 PM|
Only thing that could make it better would be a hint of lime. Really enjoyed this. My pick for potd.