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words and ways
by Emily Davidsonif there were words
to explain
the complexity of our love
i'd use them
if there were ways
to make you understand
how true my love is
i'd show you
but i do all i can
and it still falls flat;
i say all i can say
and you are still silent
we're both sick, twisted, dishonest
i'm sorry it has to be this way
but i think you have the power to change it 05/06/2008 Posted on 05/15/2008
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/15/08 at 03:09 AM Leave em on their knees, eh? I dunno. That's the feeling I got. Especially in the last line. Great writing. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/16/08 at 02:14 AM Courageously honest piece of writing Emily. I just hope this didn't fall on deaf ears. Continued success with your writing! :o) |
| Posted by Matthew Sharp on 05/16/08 at 02:16 AM im in a similar situation.
where i sell myself out and sacrifice self-esteem to try to fullfill blind hopes turned frustration.
i love your words and how they painted this picture. |
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