| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 05/06/08 at 05:53 AM Guh... I want that. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/08/08 at 12:17 AM Oh! -those preludes are the most thrill, aren't they? ;) |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/08/08 at 12:20 AM (you are such a Lovely poet, angelina. vento di lunedì is monday's wind -thank you for this! |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/08/08 at 08:44 PM You have given the wind a lovers touch with this poem..so beautiful and playful. smh |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/08/08 at 10:00 PM Your special touch with words is so refreshing. Thank you. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/09/08 at 01:05 AM This has overtones of a walk in the park. Methinks I detect a little Angel in Nonna’s curly locks.
A discovery worth concession and a memory worth confession! Me likes.
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| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/09/08 at 12:06 PM Fresh breezes blow upon the fevered brow
In words of pleasured innocence
I mark them well and go on my way
Refreshed |
| Posted by Ann Krischus on 05/09/08 at 12:43 PM "dance me on your breath
my perfumed hair silken
swirls around your fingers
spirit rising weaves spirals
absolutely brilliant!!! |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/09/08 at 03:15 PM "i do concede you pervade me vibrant in amative games of tag" - what a captivating opening to a captivating poem Maria. It could be Monday's wind or a lover, and who is to say the wind doesn't feel like a lover on such a day, in such a mood...beautiful as always Maria, and by the way I too adore the line "amative games of tag" as it is so playfully creative. :-)
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| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/09/08 at 05:44 PM Or it could be the love of a grandchild, or so many different kinds of adoration! Your shimmering soul sings to me, Maria! Love to you, darling one. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/09/08 at 09:41 PM Nice to read Maria....CharMin |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 05/10/08 at 06:19 AM The unquestioned queen of sensuality...good to read you in fine fiery form, Maria |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 05/11/08 at 08:47 PM Monday, the start of a new week in earnest; this is hopeful, sensual, evocative, vibrant... in one word, beautiful! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 05/11/08 at 09:51 PM Molto bello Maria! |
