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i do concede

by Maria Massarella


i do concede
you pervade me
vibrant in
amative games of tag
dance me
on your breath

my perfumed hair
silken swirls
around
your
fingers

spirit rising
weaves
spirals of
bliss
into the
atmo
sphere

i revel
in preludes
of your
touch

Ave
Vento di Lunedì







* m.angelina


05/05/2008

05/05/2008

Author's Note: vento di lunedì is monday's wind

Posted on 05/05/2008
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anita Mac on 05/06/08 at 05:53 AM

Guh... I want that.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/08/08 at 12:17 AM

Oh! -those preludes are the most thrill, aren't they? ;)

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/08/08 at 12:20 AM

(you are such a Lovely poet, angelina. vento di luned is monday's wind -thank you for this!

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/08/08 at 08:44 PM

You have given the wind a lovers touch with this poem..so beautiful and playful. smh

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/08/08 at 10:00 PM

Your special touch with words is so refreshing. Thank you.

Posted by JD Clay on 05/09/08 at 01:05 AM

This has overtones of a walk in the park. Methinks I detect a little Angel in Nonnas curly locks. A discovery worth concession and a memory worth confession! Me likes.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/09/08 at 12:06 PM

Fresh breezes blow upon the fevered brow In words of pleasured innocence I mark them well and go on my way Refreshed

Posted by Ann Krischus on 05/09/08 at 12:43 PM

"dance me on your breath my perfumed hair silken swirls around your fingers spirit rising weaves spirals absolutely brilliant!!!

Posted by Rula Shin on 05/09/08 at 03:15 PM

"i do concede you pervade me vibrant in amative games of tag" - what a captivating opening to a captivating poem Maria. It could be Monday's wind or a lover, and who is to say the wind doesn't feel like a lover on such a day, in such a mood...beautiful as always Maria, and by the way I too adore the line "amative games of tag" as it is so playfully creative. :-)

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/09/08 at 05:44 PM

Or it could be the love of a grandchild, or so many different kinds of adoration! Your shimmering soul sings to me, Maria! Love to you, darling one.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/09/08 at 09:41 PM

Nice to read Maria....CharMin

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 05/10/08 at 06:19 AM

The unquestioned queen of sensuality...good to read you in fine fiery form, Maria

Posted by Mara Meade on 05/11/08 at 08:47 PM

Monday, the start of a new week in earnest; this is hopeful, sensual, evocative, vibrant... in one word, beautiful!

Posted by Laurie Blum on 05/11/08 at 09:51 PM

Molto bello Maria!

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