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"Honey, I've been thinking blah, blah, blah....."
by Sandy M. HumphreyMy voice is weak from pouring forth words and phrases yet unheard
Repetitive cycle has given me carpel tunnel of the larynx
I vow to remain silent and rest in a vacuum of question marks
Knowing my resolve will dissipate and fold into frustration
Due to total lack of recognition of my withdrawal from conversation
I am resigned to the task of learning to accept hearing my own voice
Speaking from within for sometimes it seems I am the only one
Other than my Creator who truly gets what I am going on and on and on
(Pardon me if I quote you wont you dear) about or maybe it is only
I who truly feels so passionately for this moment, this subject, and you
04/23/2008 Posted on 04/23/2008
Copyright © 2024 Sandy M. Humphrey
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/23/08 at 09:15 PM Hi Sandy. This poem seems to "pour forth" or out anyways, and I'll bet it felt good to get it on paper. And it makes a definitive statement about the narrator. Well said. Thanks. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/23/08 at 09:20 PM Good poem Sandy. The second line is a gas....CharMin |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 04/23/08 at 09:21 PM This just made me laugh!! "carpel tunnel of the larynx" Indeed!!! Funny and entertaining.
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| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 04/24/08 at 01:50 AM ah yes, you have described this frustration very well. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/24/08 at 03:31 PM ...sandy, keep on keeping on!, men! and i'm one, sheeesh, peeps don't listen to others(especially men) and some boat is being missed, and i look back and am ashamed of when i THOUGHT i was listening annnd i wasn't...so blind as those who can but do not see, eh? good write, charlie |
| Posted by Elizabeth Shaw on 05/08/08 at 04:23 AM great wit & style. thanks |
| Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 08/29/08 at 01:12 PM How creatively done. Venus and Mars do align with the stars once in awhile tho, which makes it all so darn perfect...... |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 01/04/10 at 04:18 PM Ah, yes, listening IS one of the greatest acts of love. I am sure I don't always appreciate the love others give me when I go on and on... which I have a bad tendency to do. Thanks, Sandy. |
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