| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/07/08 at 03:03 PM ...water, the essence of life and you nail it...sippin' our tea[s] and thinking of someone[we love, orr] good un kathabela, charlie |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 04/07/08 at 07:15 PM An exotic and serene scene you have painted with your words! Lovely and calming. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/07/08 at 08:50 PM A lovely scene in this lotus garden. You have created calm and patience and anticipation. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/09/08 at 07:27 PM What gentleness and tender observation. Just beautiful, Kath. Thanks. |
| Posted by Shirin Swift on 04/11/08 at 03:27 AM "soothed by the sight/of water on the lotus leaf" is the perfect touch, it is those surprising little things often overlooked that can turn out to be sort of revelatory, the way they can re-focus an otherwise ordinary day and re-centre the self... a heady, lovely poem. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 04/13/08 at 05:21 AM What a beautiful and thought provoking vignette! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 04/14/08 at 02:45 PM The vision of you sitting in this lush garden, contemplating the simple but elegant peace of the lotus - lovely Kathleen! |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 04/15/08 at 03:37 AM this is the simple and sweet romance nature brings us that i can never seem to think of... |
