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no good pome
by Charlie Morgani don't write no bad pomes.
all pomes are good.
some pomes are gooder.
some stink though.
they all laugh
back at me.
i found a smart one,
undusted a dumb one too
hiding it's title.
most pomes talk a lot
some about broke hearts,
or about a coyotes' moon,
one's a prairie dog town
on vacation, bags in tow.
i know of this one pome,
a gooder one, that spoke
of a mouse in his pome
and finding his way out.
i laughed, a gooder one.
and it's about a mouse.
03/29/2008 Posted on 03/29/2008
Copyright © 2026 Charlie Morgan
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/30/08 at 02:55 AM That first stanza just...kicks so much ass. |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 03/31/08 at 02:48 PM this made me crack up and smile and wince a bit all for the fact that i taught in south carolina last year and the reality of my high schoolers presenting a poem worded just as this isn't at all a farce. definitely playful and subtly smart though...hiding your intelligence behind the tricky ignorance. good times chaz! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/31/08 at 06:17 PM I really like your approach here Charlie. An entertaining read to be sure. :o) |
| Posted by Anastasia Selby on 04/01/08 at 07:03 PM I really enjoyed this. Really. Love the language you use. |
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