| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/21/08 at 07:55 PM ...george, thoreau spoke of 'quiet desperation' of each living soul...and this does too, existentially smacko! good living/dying point...charlie |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/22/08 at 12:25 AM A really enjoyable treatment, despite the subject. Stanza's 2 and 3 were exceptional. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 03/22/08 at 06:14 AM Man this is dark. But it is also that reality of thought of loss and goodbyes that gathers dust in our mind unto our death.. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 03/22/08 at 07:58 PM It is real, isn't it George, that despair of knowing that bliss has run its course. *sigh* You write of it beautifully and with the sad expertise of someone who knows firsthand. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 03/23/08 at 03:37 AM Very thought provoking and emotional! |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 03/23/08 at 11:58 PM Wow. Very nice. And...i can't figure out what else to say. |
| Posted by Carissa Dewey on 03/24/08 at 05:06 AM frightening. this idea terrifies me, it is everywhere, poems, novels, lives that surround me, i hope to escape it! nevertheless your words mirror my fears, very well written. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/30/08 at 07:57 PM Whoever said that death is the end of suffering was right. And this eloquently scripted piece will surely stand the test of unforgotten time. |
