| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/19/08 at 04:04 PM ...oooh kristina, i like i like, this is to be read several times and each time "see" that tale being chased...scrumptious...peace, charlie |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 03/19/08 at 05:34 PM The subplots are the killers and it sometimes takes years to even know they are there. Well done m'lady! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 03/19/08 at 05:40 PM Fantastic Senryu! You capture the animalistic nature wonderfully for us and them. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 03/19/08 at 05:41 PM p.s. my pick for potd as well ;-D |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 03/22/08 at 10:21 PM Truth in so few words. Perfectly expressed. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/23/08 at 02:06 PM wow. just wow. (((you wordmaster!))) |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/13/08 at 06:20 PM Very well done in so few words. Very well written as well! |
