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by Jim Benz

If yesterday's poem was a laxative
squirting from my ass
like a fountain
to the page where it plopped,
then today's poem
is the resurrection of yesterday's shit
growing riper.

Did something die in here?


 


03/17/2008

Author's Note: yes, this may be classified as a "writer's block" poem.

Posted on 03/17/2008
Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 03/17/08 at 11:13 PM

Well, it's the most vividly explicit writer's block poem I've ever read.

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 03/18/08 at 03:10 AM

Never thought of it this way!!! MFS

Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 03/18/08 at 05:26 AM

Lots of things grow out of $#%@, you know.

Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 03/18/08 at 05:27 AM

And by "$#%@" I meant excrement.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/18/08 at 05:32 PM

I've seen a lot of seed in the garden and pasture in animal's "excrement" ;); I'm opting to see something positive grow out of this. Ha!

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 03/18/08 at 07:58 PM

Ahhh, but the beauty of this kind of death is the resurrection of all creativity. Nice :-)

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