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on the notes of a dream

by Maria Massarella

And the breath veers
light as island breeze
when enamoured eyes
gravitate
the geography of silkenness
reverent roaming the skin 

attentive my vagabond tongue
escalates your virility planes
amber-moon lips
smooth
upon your magnificence

aquiescent
your gaze dances 
mine
on the ultimate notes
of this melody
ambrosial
in complicity's arms
we sip of divineness

     *m.angelina

03/12/2008

Author's Note: * playing with it.
I'll get it right one day
Then it will be perfect.
... the poem ... blushes

Posted on 03/12/2008
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/12/08 at 04:23 AM

Beautiful. Just very visually arresting.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/13/08 at 04:20 AM

Each word leads to the next effortlessly. The background is serenely beautiful. "we sip of divineness" - ambrosia, indeed. Thank you!

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